Draft Magazine Feedback

Cover

• Model needs to look like they are putting effort into something
• It is bland at the moment
• Bands are too broad for Indie magazine
• Interesting fonts
• Very sparse
• No apparent colour scheme

Contents

• Good layout
• Polaroids need to be own images
• More text on contents lines
• Lack of colour scheme

Double-page Spread

• Needs to have more 'punch'
• School field photo is not appropriate/doesn't fit with music magazine
• Needs adding to article
• Use colour images

R & P Level: 4

Practical Draft Level: Mid level 2